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1. The Fundraising Committee shall be a standing committee that shall be responsible for presenting an annual budget with recommendations for raising money to defray expenses as may be directed by the membership
Aiko Thanks for checking. I agree about the redundancy of double "shalls". I copied and pasted these statements from our bylaws, so I think the Committee charters should be changed there first. Something to bring up at our next monthly meeting.
Again, eliminate wordiness. I don’t feel that it is necessary to repeat “shall be a standing committee that shall be”. Is not “is responsible” sufficient?
I’m not an English teacher. I like short and to the point.
Aiko Thanks for checking. I agree about the redundancy of double "shalls". I copied and pasted these statements from our bylaws, so I think the Committee charters should be changed there first. Something to bring up at our next monthly meeting.
Again, eliminate wordiness. I don’t feel that it is necessary to repeat “shall be a standing committee that shall be”. Is not “is responsible” sufficient?
I’m not an English teacher. I like short and to the point.